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15 February 2009 @ 00:15
Fanfic - Torchwood (Jack/Ianto) - Stunned  
Title: Stunned
Rating: R
Pairing:: Jack/Ianto
Disclaimer: I don't own them, sadly :(
Summary: Ianto finds his own means of making Jack let his guard down and make him experience what it's like to be fully taken over by someone
Word Count: 559
Notes: Written as a part of comment_fic, has use of stun guns.



Ianto considers the stun gun as a thing of beauty; mechanical and electrical precision that gets the job done, with no need for unnecessary death or permanent scars. It takes over your entire being and then passes, rather like Jack takes over him at night, kissing him all over, becoming so entangled in him that Ianto no longer knows where he ends and Jack begins. He’s helpless to Jack's will; something that not only arouses Ianto but actually terrifies him.

He knows he's not weak. Weak would be on a list of words that are quite unbefitting to Ianto Jones. He'd survived Canary Wharf, an experience mentally scarring enough to make any man crawl into a hole and die, cursing the day he came to Torchwood. Yet Ianto didn't, instead he miraculously kept himself together enough to rescue what was left of his girlfriend, keep her alive and even smuggle themselves into Torchwood Three. Then he had kept up a charade of contentedness amongst the four people who had kindly taken him in, knowingly betraying them.

Lisa's rampage and death should have destroyed him completely, but after all he had been through Ianto decided that was no longer an option. He owed it to himself to carry on, no matter how bleak the outlook may be. Little did he know that Jack was on the horizon, willing to take him for who he was and love him to some degree.

When Jack felt the 50,000 volts surging through him he did not panic. He had blind faith in knowing who it was behind him. He just let his nerve endings fit in the way they were designed to, as Ianto flung him onto the bed. Jack watched with still eyes as Ianto set to work, stripping him of his clothes. Immortality had granted Jack the gift to watch while he could not feel. The dark look in Ianto's eye would be enough to keep him awake for hours if he wasn't so 'blessed'.

Simple shedding of Ianto's own clothes was a teasing display to Jack's eye. He knew that body better than his own. He had mapped every inch of it at night; claiming it for his own. Yet now it was out of reach, like a prized treasure behind a display case, sending frustration through out his mind, mingling and merging with more thoughts of Ianto until they became a mass sea washing through him.

Ianto tasted Jack's skin from top to bottom. He was laid out for Ianto to dine on like a grand banquet, and all Jack could do was be completely consumed by the slightly numb sensation he received from it.

The minutes passed felt like aeons to Jack, wishing to himself for his body to awaken. Undeniably he was enjoying this, his nerves may be out of reach but blood still flowed enthusiastically to his groin, proving this. But he felt so threadbare, so vulnerable, and that is something Jack cannot allow himself to be; no matter if it makes him seem cold to the others. He can't let his guard down; otherwise someone will slip in, under the wire. It's only when Jack's body comes back to world of the living, with Ianto buried inside him and fresh marks and scratches adorning him with a bittersweet sting that he realises.

It's too late.
 
 
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woman_of_: Jack/Ianto made for mewoman_of_ on 15th February 2009 01:39 (UTC)
Maybe now Jack knows he can let go with Ianto. Lovely!
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto Snog!jemzamia on 15th February 2009 12:48 (UTC)
Hopefully :)
Thanks!
daylyn: Jack Ianto clasping_lilly8408daylyn on 15th February 2009 02:29 (UTC)
Ooh... powerful and lovely. Wonderful touching on their feelings (especially those never expressed).
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto Snog!jemzamia on 15th February 2009 12:47 (UTC)
Oooh thanks :D
A Geek in Tie-Dye: So closejemariel on 15th February 2009 02:31 (UTC)
Damn you. I've had "Ianto's good with a stun-gun" on my list of things to write for weeks, and now you've preempted me! Heh. Oh well, I find myself not minding so much.

Mmm, Jack's sense of touch coming back to *that*... lovely. Just lovely.
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto FTWjemzamia on 15th February 2009 12:46 (UTC)
Ooops sorry! XD

Thanks :)
quaintheart: face_gareth_smile close upquaintheart on 15th February 2009 02:39 (UTC)
OH, wow. Heart stopping, loved the last line. excellent suspenseful tale.

Merci
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto Snog!jemzamia on 15th February 2009 12:47 (UTC)
Wow thank you! XD
hab318princess on 15th February 2009 12:01 (UTC)
wonderful use of the stun gun, not one I'd ever considered... lovely catch of their emotions too.
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto Snog!jemzamia on 15th February 2009 12:38 (UTC)
Ooooh thank you! XD
winter_rose91: Jack/Iantowinter_rose91 on 15th February 2009 12:44 (UTC)
Loved how Ianto was dependent on Jack without being weak, this is kinda how I see him.
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto Snog!jemzamia on 15th February 2009 12:49 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm tired of everyone thinking he's the woobie XD

Thanks for reading!
hinsoullai on 15th February 2009 21:27 (UTC)
*wriggles pleasantly in chair* That was definitely, ah ... STOP LEAVING ME SPEECHLESS, JEMZ! XD

Lovely, suspenseful to the very last line. Great idea for the stun gun, and the feelings showing through, just wow. Your writing really is fucking beautiful. ♥
__♥..Jemz-y Baby..♥__: Janto Snog!jemzamia on 15th February 2009 22:31 (UTC)
But it's my job as official wifey! XD

Awwwww ILY